Talk:New Mojito

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Bravo

This is some nice writing and some delicious puns. You might want to move some of the explicit stupidworld references to the Real World References section, maybe even using {{ref|note-name}} and #{{note|note-name|Link Back}} pairs. The livery is some nice work too.
This seems to fit with existing canon pretty well, too, apart from the obvious additions, which also feel like a good fit. I would quibble that some of the dwagonmen are merely Noble unless they're all popped in the capital (a possibility). I'm skeptical that a mercenary (or anyone not on the side) coul serve as Chief Warlord, but there's nothing disproving it yet.
Again, well done.
--Red (talk) 16:28, 25 December 2014 (UTC)